• Ashton Blyth

The intro (roughly)

In preparation for my tutorial with Jonathan, I wanted to get a rough draft of the intro completed to give him an idea of how the film will go - this is it below sans my narration.


Originally my introduction included mostly random facts and what felt like things you wrote about in your German written GCSE... like my favourite film is, what pets I had, I live with etc. so I scrapped a lot of that, and shifted some of the family stuff into a separate chapter.